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When this happens, it is indeed KERPOW! I look forward to reading the whole book. Great writing.

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Marvelous writing and superb wit. Bravo!

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This story is a captivating journey into the world of complex human emotions and intriguing encounters. Your ability to paint vivid pictures with words is truly commendable. It's as if we are right there with the characters, feeling their emotions and experiencing their moments.

The description of the encounter between the two characters is filled with tension and anticipation. The way you delve into their thoughts and reactions adds depth to the narrative. It's a reminder that attraction and connection can be found in unexpected moments.

I appreciate how you explore the subtleties of human interaction, from the significance of scents to the impact of past experiences. This story draws me in and leaves me wanting to know more about these complex characters and the path their lives will take.

Intriguing and beautifully written!

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